I ended up ordering Vendler’s book before flying off to Chicago for the weekend, and I started reading it on my flight. The first of 150 poems she discusses is “In the name of the bee,” and of this poem, Vendler said this:
“Dickinson’s first editors thought that this short invocation couldn’t be a complete poem. Making one poem out of three poems transcribed by Dickinson on a single page, they tacked this little tercet onto the end of their compound assembly.”
However, Vendler doesn’t mention the other two poems of the “assembly.” What works did first editors Mabel Loomis Todd and Thomas Wentworth Higginson combine to create a single poem?
I checked and found the three lines of “In the name of the bee” in the second series of Dickinson’s Poems as the benediction to a poem Todd titled “Summer’s Obsequies.” The other two poems are “The Gentian weaves her fringes” and “A brief, but patient illness.” To be fair to Todd and Higginson, I can understand how and why they interpreted the three creations as one. Take a look at the manuscript, the three appear as one.
“THJ regards the first three poems of F1 (Fascicle 1) as a single poem because they are separated by white space, not a drawn line. RWF prints three poems.”
Miller also presents the three as separate poems.
I’ll get into that tomorrow.
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