Category: Deliberateness

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2/19/2024

LOL – it seems that I need to rethink something!

A few days ago, I started a discussion about the idea of “deliberateness” on the part of creative artists (HERE). I posted a poem by E. E. Cummings, “l(a,” and questioned whether or not every aspect of the poem was deliberate.

In particular, I asked if the first two lines of the poem – which spell “la” and “le,” two singular articles in French – could have been deliberate on the part of Cummings.

Imma be honest, I’ve never thought so. I just thought that was coincidental.

The next day I posted a second E. E. Cummings' poem, “old age sticks.” I did this because Cummings split the poem’s final words “growing old” in such a way that the poem ends with the youthful generation “OWING old” – and then my discussion turned to Dickinson’s “work as an innovator in the field of rhyme” which “permanently altered the ears of poets and readers.”

And then @nblumengarten responded on CoSo with this: “Going from the previous poem (i.e., “l(a”), "tres" and "pas” (from “old age sticks): Tres meaning, "very" and pas, meaning "the right of precedence."

To which I gasped and had an “aha moment.”

I responded, “Cummings did live in Paris for a short time! I always tended to think the le/la in “l(a” was coincidental. I think I need to rethink that!”

I’d also seen the “tres” and “pas” beaucoup times and (a) I’ve always wondered why not “tress” and “PASS” and (b) I never once thought, “there must be a secondary meaning with French words.”

Obviously by using “tres” and “pas,” Cummings was deliberate. The words are meant to suggest “trespass” AND to provide additional meaning in French.

Sooo…now I’m a believer: “la” and “le” were equally deliberate!

There are no coincidences.

NOTE: I posted all of this on CounterSocial -- the social media platform I joined after I deleted my Twitter account (due to the takeover by Melon Husk & the proliferation of hate speech and misinformation) -- and following all of this, there was some debate as to what "pas" meant in French.

One person said, "I've never seen "pas" translated as "the right of precedence." However, another showed a dictionary entry for the word with "1: the right of precedence; 2: a dance step or combination of steps." Even so, the debate continued.

At one point, I added, "Well, I don’t speak French, so I don’t know the nuances of the language, but even if "pas" just stands for “not,” it fits the poem. Plus I always wondered why Cummings put “tres” and “pas” vs. “pass” — and French makes so much sense!"

Finally, I added, "I listen to classical music, & in the car tonight on the way home, I heard just the end of what the announcer said was a 'Pas de Deux' from some work by Igor Stravinsky -- and it hit me: the idea of "pas" as "dance" in the Cummings' poem "old age sticks" -- as EVERY generation of parents & older folks rebuff the new generation's dance moves. I love it! LOL -- I NEVER thought of the 'French connection' for this poem -- but it makes so much sense!"

Oo la la, say "la vie," and excuse my French -- as they say! ; )

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Deliberate Intent -- Part 1

2/16/2024

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I’ve been busy, busy, busy – so I’ve been making slow progress in reading Judy Jo Small’s book “Positive as Sound: Emily Dickinson’s Rhyme.”

Sooo…over time I’ll post info from the book and discuss various points, and today I’ll start with a compelling point made early in the book – in its introduction – and then turn to a poem by E. E. Cummings. Then tomorrow, I’ll have some discussion on another poem by Cummings – and soon thereafter I’ll return to Dickinson (and maybe even some lyrics by Dua Lipa?).

In “Positive as Sound,” Small wrote “...we may conclude that Dickinson had a strong, relatively unwavering sense of how she wanted her poems to sound and that she pursued that end deliberately.” Two pages later, she said, “that Dickinson’s rhymes are not the result of casual neglect.”

And it is that sense of “deliberateness” of poets – and painters, song-writers, sculptors, choreographers, photographers, etc. – and the fact that their work is not at all “the result of casual neglect” – that I’d like to examine this morning.

In poetry, every word, every syllable, every rhyme and every rhythm is pondered, planned, and purposeful – in short, everything is deliberate.

I definitely believe that is true – certainly close to 99% of the time. LOL.

Let’s take a look at E. E. Cummings’ “l(a" (shown at the right). In this poem, Cummings symbolizes loneliness as falling leaf – AND – he emphasized the concept of loneliness very deliberately in the way he dismantled, sliced, and rearranged the words.

In the first line, he used a lowercase “L,” which looks like the number one, and it’s separated parenthetically (to emphasize isolation) from the letter “a,” a single article in English. In line 7, the word “one” appears, and in line 8, there is another lowercase “L” that looks like a number one.

The structure of the poem – which represents a leaf falling to the ground – also depicts the structure of a number one – AND – the result at the bottom, “iness” (which I pronounce as “eye-ness,” i.e., the state of being “I”) – is the state of being one’s self.

All of this arrangement was purposeful and deliberate. Everything about the poem symbolizes and emphasizes loneliness.

I have even heard it suggested that in the first two lines of the poem, Cummings used the French singular articles “la” and “le” to underscore the idea of loneliness even further.

What do you think? Cummings was VERY deliberate in his arrangement. He was extremely deliberate. There was no “casual neglect.”

So did Cummings purposely hew this poem to include the French singular articles? Was he, in fact, that deliberate?

Deliberate Intent -- Part 2

Yesterday I began a discussion about “deliberateness” – the purposeful intent of an artist when creating a work – and in particular, a poet creating a poem.

This idea grew from statements in Judy Jo Small’s book “Positive as Sound: Emily Dickinson’s Rhyme”: “...we may conclude that Dickinson had a strong, relatively unwavering sense of how she wanted her poems to sound and that she pursued that end deliberately”; and two pages later, she said, “that Dickinson’s rhymes are not the result of casual neglect.”

Before getting to a work by Dickinson, I posted a short – but very deliberately written – poem by E.. E. Cummings – and I did ask if a couple of details in the poem were, indeed, deliberate – or coincidental? (Refer to Part 1 of this post above.)

Before getting to a discussion of Dickinson’s (and others’) deliberateness, I’d like to offer one other poem by Cummings, “old age sticks.”

This poem is obviously about generational differences/gap, and Cummings included some very creative details in emphasizing his point. For one, note that the language and images of the older generation are confined within parentheses – and the images of youth are outside those boundaries. Even the first line has a bit of a double meaning: not only does the older generation stick up signs of keep off, mustn’t and don’t – but older folks also often walk with “old age sticks” (i.e., canes).

Of course, at the end of the poem, stark reality hits: the youth go right on growing old.

When I teach this poem, I tell students that I believe there are two VERY important words related to the overall message of this poem.

Hmm...what two words could they be?

I’ll divulge them tomorrow when I continue discussing the idea of "deliberateness" with writers, artists, musicians, etc.
In the meantime – any guesses as to the two words I’m talking about?

Deliberate Intent -- Part 3

A couple of days ago, I started a discussion about the idea of “deliberateness” on the part of creative artists. I posted a poem by E. E. Cummings, “l(a,” and questioned whether or not every aspect of the poem was deliberate.

Yesterday, I posted a second E. E. Cummings' poem, “old age sticks,” and I mentioned that there were two words in the poem in particular that I felt were extremely important – and those two words actually come from the dissection of the poem’s final words “growing old”: Youth “goes right on growing old”; however, in the way Cummings split the words, youth also goes on “OWING old.”

Although the poem seems to focus on gaps and differences between generations, the ending subtly but masterfully recognizes that the newer, younger generation actually “owes” the previous generation for yanking down barriers, breaking glass ceilings, and stretching the boundaries they faced.

Of course, all of this discussion started when I quoted Judy Jo Small from her book “Positive as Sound: Emily Dickinson’s Rhyme”: “...we may conclude that Dickinson had a strong, relatively unwavering sense of how she wanted her poems to sound and that she pursued that end deliberately.”

Later in her introduction, Small said this: “Her work as an innovator in the field of rhyme, furthermore, has permanently altered the ears of poets and readers.”

She then quotes two lines from a poem by Frost (shown at the right):

Never again would birds' song be the same.
And to do that to birds was why she came.

Over time, Dickinson’s work increasingly became viewed by scholars and the public as “innovative rather than flawed.” As a result, all of the generations of poets after Dickinson “owe” her (to use Cummings’ verb) for stretching the boundaries of what was thought to be formal poetry.

More on this tomorrow.

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