For each poem, I've provided a few comments. Under that, I've posted the poem by Emmett Lee Dickinson on the left, and then the poem Dickinson's work inspired third cousin Emily to write on the right.
1. "If I could tell how old it is": In this poem, Emmett Lee Dickinson seems to be talking about some sort of antique? My iPhone indicated that I added this poem to my Notes app in late June 2019, so was something going on then about some sort of aged artifact or relic? I dunno. So with out further ado....
By Emmett Lee Dickinson: If I could tell how old it is I should now be so glad – But when I can’t make out its Age, Nor figure out its Brand, I know it is a sign, That olden Days did see Now generations further off From its Modernity. | By Emily Dickinson: If I could tell how glad I was I should not be so glad – But when I cannot make the Force, Nor mould it into Word, I know it is a sign That new Dilemna be From mathematics further off Than for Eternity. |
By Emmett Lee Dickinson: I read his sentence – steadily – Reviewed it with my eyes, To see that I made no mistake In his extremist lies – The Date, and manner, of his shame – And in his Biased Form That “God have mercy” on our Souls The Klan had voted him – I made my soul familiar – with his extremities-- That at the last, it should not be a novel Agony – But he, and Death, acquainted – Meet dismally, as friends – Salute, and pass, without a Hint – And there, the Matter ends – | By Emily Dickinson: I read my sentence – steadily – Reviewed it with my eyes, To see that I made no mistake In its extremest clause – The Date, and manner, of the shame – And then the Pious Form That "God have mercy" on the Soul The Jury voted Him – I made my soul familiar – with her extremity – That at the last, it should not be a novel Agony – But she, and Death, acquainted – Meet tranquilly, as friends – Salute, and pass, without a Hint – And there, the Matter ends – |
By Emmett Lee Dickinson: Of Squad we ask one favor That he’ll be overridden – For what he is presumed to be – His Crimes, from us, are hidden Committed his whole Life Convict and send to Prison We’ll sing and dance with Happiness That too competes with Heaven. | By Emily Dickinson: Of God we ask one favor, That we may be forgiven – For what, he is presumed to know – The Crime, from us, is hidden – Immured the whole of Life Within a magic Prison We reprimand the Happiness That too competes with Heaven. |
By Emmett Lee Dickinson: Show me their Unity, and I will show you Lunacy – Both in one package lain And lifted back again – Be Sure – while I am Emmett Lee Be known -- what he has ever said – Insanity | By Emily Dickinson: Show me Eternity, and I will show you Memory – Both in one package lain And lifted back again – Be Sue – while I am Emily – Be next – what you have ever been – Infinity. |